Kingdom Carrier

I don't have a lot of time on my hands, but I want you to know I am still writing and have not given up yet. Thanx for your support ...

I really like this story, and I think it has real potential. The only thing I have to complain about is the fact that you don't have anything to separate ...

I will be changing this ASAP, so be on the lookout for Aurali(revised)! Thank you!

I won't say much, mostly because I might as well have just woken up, but I really like where this is going. The grammar- and tense-problems slowed me down a ...

I just got finished reading Martin the Warrior today. I wonder why they never give the vermin a chance to stay with them... Anywho, I'm starting Outcast of Redwall today, ...

Oh... Hannah. I like it. Try to keep info like that private... 8)

I'm glad that you decided to add to it, but I really wanna know more about this monster! :) I think you need to add a little more feeling to ...

Ring-Ring Ring-Ring Ring-Ring RING-RING RING-RING-RING! RING-RING-RING-RING!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!! Gir does rock!! GO GIR!!! sugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugar! I LOVE Tostitos!!

I love Redwall, but I don't really agree with this: Something like from the age of eight to the age of thirteen, perhaps even another year or two. The Redwall ...

You really have to read a story at least twice before you realize certain things about it. It's pretty, but like you said, trippy. I especially like this: Year upon ...

Yeah, it was supposed to sound like a poem and look like a letter-well, not really. I really just wrote this in my free time. Thank you, Dream Deep. While ...

Hey, when I revise this, should I keep it under here, or should I create a new folder? :smt031 :roll:

Dear Beloved, I feel replaced. He is a much better person, obviously, because you stare into his eyes, when you look not my way. What has he that I have ...

The word random is randomly random at random times of random days occurring at random events that happen near random people, randomly. Grr rocks!! I like ice cream! :shock: Fleas!! ...

First of all, when you have writers block, should you just force yourself to try to write, or wait it out until you feel in the mood? Plus, how can ...